Score: 7

"Great sprite movie"

submission: Shroom of the dead

date: January 8, 2006

Graphics: I had to give you a 1, because to be honest, you really didn't do much other than the gun.

Style: I don't really like sprite movies, and the idea of mario with a gun has kinda been done before.

Sound: Good, I liked the sound. I also like the fact that you didn't try to do voice-overs like some sprite movies do.

Violence: Great, I like the basic idea for the mushrooms and stuff. Also, it was pretty fast paced.

Humor: Pretty damn funny. I laughed when the gun came out of the block, and when the banana came out.

Overall: Fantastic, I usually ignore sprite movies, with the exception of this, and a few others. I really like the humor, and the violence. This could shape up to be a really good series. I'll definately be waiting for the next one.

Score: 6

"Okay for your first movie"

submission: Super Hero High ep1

date: January 8, 2006

Graphics: Good for a first submission.

Style: I like the idea, but just interviews don't do much. If it was actually a story that took place in a highschool, it might be better.

Sound: Not too good. The voice acting could be better, but it's not really a problem, but the subtitles sinc up horribly with the voice.

Humor: To be honest, I just didn't find it that funny. The captain obvious character was just something that has been done before, and the other one just wasn't really funny.

Overall: Great for a first submission. With a little work, you could become a great well known artist. Your graphics don't need too much improvement, but your scripts and ideas definately do. Overall, this is an okay submission, and definately good practice to help you become a better artist. Great job.